post Category: Poetry post Comments (7) postOctober 22, 2005

Perhaps you don’t see the smile when I hear a song
or my laughter when I realize nothing’s wrong.
Maybe I read just a little bit much
or write things that make me seem sad and such,
I hold close the parts that make me real
that show you how I truly feel.
It is easy to think I am caught in a place, turning in circles because I can’t get out of being down. It is easy to get into that mode where nothing is right and while you acknowledge the good things around you, you chew on the wrong things to work them through.

Sometimes you’re the only sound I hear
this is a whisper in my heart
drawing me ever near
and I’m waiting to wake up
from this beautiful space
where my dreams and yours
are conversations in place.

(From apple-picking!)

..there are 7 comment(s) so far.

#1

I can hear the song you’re singing here…

george wrote on October 22, 2005 - 9:29 pm
#2

mmmmm… apples!
as usual, love your poems.

dragfyre wrote on October 24, 2005 - 9:24 am
#3

Thanks! :-)

Sholeh wrote on October 24, 2005 - 3:23 pm
#4

From afar your cry is in my mind
Whispering…
Whispering…
Your presence annoying me

I hear you call into the wind
My love…
My death…
And unto this night before sun shall hit-
-the fields and plains
I will cry a tear
So ever cold
For you
God

Lara wrote on October 24, 2005 - 3:55 pm
#5

Lara! That is wonderful!
(and hey, nice site haha)

Sholeh wrote on October 24, 2005 - 8:26 pm
#6

Beautiful. Long time no speak…

JW wrote on October 25, 2005 - 2:52 pm
#7

Thank you Jamal.

Sholeh wrote on October 25, 2005 - 11:24 pm
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