Sliding Thoughts

In a rhyme

I don’t normally like to rhyme so much, but this poem just wanted to be written, I had no control over it. ;-)

I see one taking up the burden
and this one holding down the fort
one reaching out to the stragglers
and this one reaching out for more.
I see one singing out prayers
and this one singing out dreams
one peeling off layers
and this one apart at the seams.
I see one learning about beauty
and this one learning about art
one learning about science
and this one is just trying to start
I see one being neglected
and this one showing them devotion
one feels rejected
and this one can’t show emotion.
I see one laughing with joy
and this one supremely content
one is going in circles
and this one is barely present.
I’m not describing specific people
or even a specific event.
I’m describing the matchless beauty
that these youth represent.

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Posted in Poetry by sholeh on March 22nd, 2005 at 5:24 pm.

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  1. I like this.

  2. Sholeh Mar 22nd 2005

    thanks. :-)

  3. niiiice one if i was a better musician i would compose music for this poem i liked it very much aafarin sholeh
    -P

  4. illmatic

  5. Yeah this one rocks!!!! Very true.