Dec 10

Last night

post Category: Poetry post Comments (4) postDecember 10, 2007

there were little pieces of the remnants of my heart on the sidewalk
last night
mixed in with the fallen leaves and snails
and we walked over unknowingly
with laughter and slight sighs
the closer to feeling, the more we talk to ourselves to fill silence…
I wonder what you would do if you knew.the sun is always in our eyes when we smile.

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#1

very nice.

dena wrote on December 11, 2007 - 10:01 pm
#2

Thank you :-)

sholeh wrote on December 12, 2007 - 8:24 am
#3

Absolutely beautiful poem. I feel like I’ve been in that exact same spot you’ve described. You described it perfectly.

Steve wrote on December 16, 2007 - 4:14 am
#4

Thank you, Steve. I was hoping I was able to convey it.

sholeh wrote on December 16, 2007 - 9:31 am
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